English battle - wer traut sich?

anyone up for a battle?
i'll open a thread!

but only serious ones please!!!
 
the majority of emcees 'n here
are the minority, reality sees out there
lackin popularity, social issues, man its crystal clear
causin jealousy 'n venues, while positivity disappears
greed blindin niggas, C.R.E.A.M's all they see in their careers
....
 
TOP THAT...

i step on the mic and make yall twist like a blunt,
frontin on me is like u try to stick ur fist in ur butt,
ull never make it, u really got no chance at all,
cause 2 RAW is obviously too advanced for yaw,
 
Original geschrieben von Gizmow
Deadly Weapon!!!

You get what you deserve, when you step into my cypher.
I can't stop....I will battle till your time's up.
That's exactly now, check me out, I'm rappin' cool..? That's my art!

Yes, your friends already know, that' I'm gonna smack you down.
Like I did it with ALL-Day, I'm knockin' you,cause you the wack in town.
Let my flow swim' into your ass to pump up.
Your body gets bump,bump,bump,when my rap comes up.
UHHH, your dick is long enough?
I don't think so, cause' you got no balls to rock.
Yes, you got a pussy and I'll **** you, bitch till I die.
You see, I got a dick and ****in' Skillz for a rhyme.
Now, it's your turn, spit out and cry.

...you punk, don't know what's gonin' on.....let me know where ya at?....
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...first of all,i´m not all-day..call me deadly boy-i´m the shit!check
this
befo you get your head split,go home and fetch the med kit
you really wanted to battle,but you never should have said shit
i got your pad and pen kit,yeah,i´m tryin to inspect it
but its full of whack diseased shit,and i gotta disinfect it
gizmow read all my posts before he started atackin me
disappointed though,cuz in his head he said"i hope this cat´s
as wack as me"
the only reason you´re in2 diz battle and exhibit flow
is your first2 opponents had no verses cuz yo they didn´t show
so far the only battle you´ve won is"whose comp is gone the
most"
you talk 2 much about dicks,pussys&bitches!punk sut up ya
whack as ya post
i´m gainin a rep on this forum,i´m glad you´re here to see it
increase
changin G-S´mo 2G times zero,cuz you ain´t a G in the least
i can see your dreams of success in hip hop are quickly departin´
you should follow your people,strive to be live like ricky martin
sayin dat battlin ain´t your steez makes me in no way a player
hater...i´m just cleaner,all my posts appear neater
you can´t drop bombs,heres some POM-POMS-you can be my
cheer leader............

No Beef
1LOVE
peAce
 
oh oh,
my terminology is high quality,
i be attracting forces like gravity
verbalizin ya with straight punctuality
now watch me attack 'n disable yo flow
can't take this bullshit no mo'
reality is, you wanna be the big picture
thats insanity, coz I'm the dreamcatcher once I hit cha
split cha, take away yo dreams, if i woulda met cha
now picture this
you cant mess with my flawlessness
dont care if you be puffin a zig zagged blunt in yo diss
my goal is, to get wannabes dismissed
aint nuttin personal, just strictly business
its all written here in my death wish list
i'm the hitman, lyrically too dangerous, my bullets will never miss!!
 
DEADLY WEAPON IS MY MAN...

GO ON WID DAT SHIT DEADLY....

ALL DAY AND GIZMO R SOKKING HARD DICK...
 
Genglish...

every day ALL DAY fags try to front on pros,
cursin is all what they know, never learned to drop some flows,
i read ur raps and had to cry,
if ur the last mc then let me die, brainwash process over now ur head is dry,
analyze this little advise and see the hint,
only cause u talk bout bitches doesnt mean ur a PIMP,
only cause u talk bout gats doesnt mean that u bust,
im keepin it ruff 2RAW4YAW no need to discuss,
im heatin shit up, put the heat to ur head,
but i dont pull it back cause u bleeded enuff...
 
Re: Genglish...

Original geschrieben von 2 Raw
every day ALL DAY fags try to front on pros,
cursin is all what they know, never learned to drop some flows,
i read ur raps and had to cry,
if ur the last mc then let me die, brainwash process over now ur head is dry,
analyze this little advise and see the hint,
only cause u talk bout bitches doesnt mean ur a PIMP,
only cause u talk bout gats doesnt mean that u bust,
im keepin it ruff 2RAW4YAW no need to discuss,
im heatin shit up, put the heat to ur head,
but i dont pull it back cause u bleeded enuff...
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your output of vocabs, terribly weak, you a low level lyricist, an F.O.B. so to speak
I’ll send you a Dictionary for you to keep,
while I bring Hip Hop literature in a formal way,
with my name at the bottom, as my signature - All Day
your mood is crappy, ya ate too much seafood, you be hurlin at the sink
I thought I smelled somthin funny, its your cheap rhymes that stink
I said it once before, but cant get enuff, you aint Raw nor Ruff
not even PUFF enuff to handle BAD BOYS stuff
Like a PIMP I run y’all amateurs like Bitches, you the one hatin, tryin to snitch this
callin me a fag, but you’re just as gay as Abercrombie ’n Fitch is
I talk about Gats coz I bust rhymes all day, AM 'n PM
you're just another percentage of MCs I burn per Diem
 
Damn! I hate Macintosh PCs.
i'm sittin here @ my school usin a mac, and I just wrote a real tight rhyme, using the last bit of lunch time I got left, and then i try to make the rhymes bold. I look for the combination for those: "[]" to make some shit bold, but suddenly, after using CTRL or ALT and è, my whole rhyme is deleted.
**** you, Apple! :mad: :mad: :mad: ;)
 
Original geschrieben von Strike Da Mic
Damn! I hate Macintosh PCs.
i'm sittin here @ my school usin a mac, and I just wrote a real tight rhyme, using the last bit of lunch time I got left, and then i try to make the rhymes bold. I look for the combination for those: "[]" to make some shit bold, but suddenly, after using CTRL or ALT and è, my whole rhyme is deleted.
**** you, Apple! :mad: :mad: :mad: ;)
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fu** u if u can't handle it, biaaaatch

mac 4 life































































;)
 
I strike da mic, rhyme some tight, linez of mine /
like my mind's a nine - bitch, you'll never find the time /
to hit me back - easy reason: your shit is wack /
bitch, attack - won't be no use; I'll kill ya like when I broke fifty's neck //
yeah, buddy - you're damn right, lookin at me thinkin "That man's tight" /
keep starin and chockin - or try to diss me, and I /
will send my shit right into your scrotum /
you'll start'a shake as if I pull out two Mack-9's and load 'em //
even if you too dumb to recognize it now - you will see it when they start votin' /
that you ain't got a chance at the mic, and that I'm ownin' /
I beat you to death and then I kill you again /
chop you into pieces and mash em until you like spam //
oh, now don't start'a shit in your pants, this is all lyrical /
get to the urinal and let it out, 'fore you become hysterical /
I am so damn tight, that is strange and still a miracle /
level's as high as if one meditates and flies high, spiritual //

critics? :)
 
Original geschrieben von Strike Da Mic
I strike da mic, rhyme some tight, linez of mine /
like my mind's a nine - bitch, you'll never find the time /
to hit me back - easy reason: your shit is wack /
bitch, attack - won't be no use; I'll kill ya like when I broke fifty's neck //
yeah, buddy - you're damn right, lookin at me thinkin "That man's tight" /
keep starin and chockin - or try to diss me, and I /
will send my shit right into your scrotum /
you'll start'a shake as if I pull out two Mack-9's and load 'em //
even if you too dumb to recognize it now - you will see it when they start votin' /
that you ain't got a chance at the mic, and that I'm ownin' /
I beat you to death and then I kill you again /
chop you into pieces and mash em until you like spam //
oh, now don't start'a shit in your pants, this is all lyrical /

get to the urinal and let it out, 'fore you become hysterical /
I am so damn tight, that is strange and still a miracle /
level's as high as if one meditates and flies high, spiritual //

critics? :)
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ich will hier jetzt keinen auf weisen und erfahreren kritiker machen... und vielleicht liegts auch daran dass es schon 1 uhr morgens is und ich hundemüde bin... aber ich würds nicht schaffen den text sauber über nen beat zu legen...

mmhh....ich kanns nicht lassen *G*

you want a critic ? - let me spit it
i'll give you some advice and then just hit it//
i can't imagine how this could suit a beat
just write it one more time while you listen to it//
if you ain't got a clear beat then do it like i do
let it clap in your head and don't let divert you//
concentrate on the flow - it will come by the time
just follow this rule - the result - a sweet line//
 
Original geschrieben von Deuce
you want a critic ? - let me spit it
i'll give you some advice and then just hit it//
i can't imagine how this could suit a beat
just write it one more time while you listen to it//
if you ain't got a clear beat then do it like i do
let it clap in your head and don't let divert you//
concentrate on the flow - it will come by the time
just follow this rule - the result - a sweet line//
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and I can't imagine how suit a beat / listen to it / like I do can rhyme ... :rolleyes: :D
well ... thanks for your critics.
I GOT a clear beat, buddy. :)
 
:confused:

i quess you didn't get it..

spit it - hit it
suit a beat - listen to it (maybe it ain't that smooth)
do it like i do - don't let divert you

und hey.... ich wollte dir nur konstruktive kritik geben.
Wenn du nicht mit so was umgehen kannst dann frag nicht danach.
 
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